The online diary.....

[JASMINE]

I think to have a diary in English is good for you....
This is a good choice for you to read or write a diary online

http://www.my-diary.org/

Just for you reference.....

I'm new of this club, if I did any thing wrong....or any English grammar mistake I made.....pls give me some suggustion directly.TKS!!

Have a nice evening

[CarmenTao]

You are really humble!
Humble persons are always the closest to success !
By the way, as far as I know, normally we say "I'm new to this club" instead of "I'm new of this club."

Maybe I'm wrong! If so, please correct me !

See ya Saturday !

Hopefully you can join the film appreciation with us after the gathering !

[JASMINE]

You are really humble!
Humble persons are always the closest to success !
By the way, as far as I know, normally we say "I'm new to this club" instead of "I'm new of this club."

Maybe I'm wrong! If so, please correct me !

See ya Saturday !

Hopefully you can join the film appreciation with us after the gathering !

after checked you are right!!!!
I'm new to this club.....is correct.

I learn it!!!! Thanks a lot.

[CarmenTao]

after checked you are right!!!!
I'm new to this club.....is correct.

I learn it!!!! Thanks a lot.

Well....if you don't mind, I'm wondering if I can do more!

"After" should be followed by V+ing
"after checked" should be "after checking." It's better if you say "after checking a dictionary" or "after looking up in a dictionary"

Normally, we use past tense to describe an action you have made. "I learned it" is better than "I learn it."

Just for your information.

Hopefully I didn't scare you away.

[JASMINE]

after checked you are right!!!!
I'm new to this club.....is correct.

I learn it!!!! Thanks a lot.

Well....if you don't mind, I'm wondering if I can do more!

"After" should be followed by V+ing
"after checked" should be "after checking." It's better if you say "after checking a dictionary" or "after looking up in a dictionary"

Normally, we use past tense to describe an action you have made. "I learned it" is better than "I learn it."

Just for your information.

Hopefully I didn't scare you away.

Thanks a lot!