Write a letter for my mother:)

[Celia]

I remember I wrote a letter for my mom long time ago,
and she keeps it untill now!
When I discovered it accidentally, I really was touched.
Although my family is not wealth, the LOVE is more than enough for all of us.
My mother is 43 years old now, and I am 23 already.
The way we communicate with each other is not similiar to the way my friends communicate with their parents.
When we go shopping,clerks always regard her as my elder sister!and my mom really enjoys it!
We did not live together since I was a senior high school student.
Yesterday she called me, the way I talked to her just like talking with my good friend,and I felt that she misses me,ha!
I decided to write her a letter,tell her I am fine recently:)
I LOVE HER,although she beat me fiercely before,ha!

[bradywang]

Lovely Mon & Daughter....

However, let me try to help to make some correction. Hope you don't mind.

I remember I wrote a letter for my mom long time ago,
amd and she keep keeps it untill now!
When I discovered it accidentally, I really was touched.
Although my family is not wealth,
but[X] the LOVE is more than enough much enough for all of us.
My mother is 43 years old now, and I am 23 alreayalready.
The way we communicate with each other is not similiar to the way my friends communicate with their parents.
When we go shopping,clerks always regard her as my elderlyelder sister!and my mom really enjoy enjoys it!
We aredid not live together since I was a senior high school student.
Yesterday she called me, the way I talked to her just like talking with my good friend,and I felt that she missmisses me,ha!
I decided to write her a letter,tell her I am fine recently:)
I LOVE HER,although she beat me fiercely before,ha!


comment: Your mon must be very looking forward to seeing you.

[Celia]

Thank you for correcting the wrong vocabularies I wrote*^_^*
PLEASE CORRECT ME WHEN I COMMIT SOMETHING WRONG :wink:

I CAN NOT USE PROPER ENGLISH, and that's why I attend the gathering every week!I wish I could speak English well someday.
Actually,I don't have to use English in school and work place now,but I don't think it is good starting to learn English untill you need!
I want to improve my English ability little by little.
Every time I go to gathering,I really appreciate that everyone is kind to teach me :D
Even teacher in cram school,I mean who teaches English for profit,has no patient like members there!
This is a good & healthy & excellent & joyful environment!

[CarmenTao]

Lovely Mon & Daughter....

However, let me try to help to make some correction. Hope you don't mind.

I remember I wrote a letter for my mom long time ago,
amd and she keep keeps it untill now!
When I discovered it accidentally, I really was touched.
Although my family is not wealth,
but[X] the LOVE is more than enough much enough for all of us.
My mother is 43 years old now, and I am 23 alreayalready.
The way we communicate with each other is not similiar to the way my friends communicate with their parents.
When we go shopping,clerks always regard her as my elderlyelder sister!and my mom really enjoy enjoys it!
We aredid not live together since I was a senior high school student.
Yesterday she called me, the way I talked to her just like talking with my good friend,and I felt that she missmisses me,ha!
I decided to write her a letter,tell her I am fine recently:)
I LOVE HER,although she beat me fiercely before,ha!


comment: Your mon must be very looking forward to seeing you.

Dear Uncle Brady,
I wanna write to my mom, too. Can you please also correct my English. 3Q very much la!